Про дно на 200к

[Эльза.]

Читаю какое-то дно на 200k. Очевидно, онгоинг. Ладно, даже не особенно дно, пока авторша не ударяется в мелодраму. Лучше, чем такие фики чаще всего бывают: обычно на эти условные 200k приходится 150к драмкружка, а тут, как выяснилось, авторше просто хотелось написать про каждый раз, когда Юдзуру выходил на лед с 2010 года.
Надо как-то выбраться из этого безобразия обратно в YOI, и все будет хорошо.

@темы: time to pull my moral socks up and behave myself, quad sal doesn't always love one back, fanfiction

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[хотела бы я быть миссис хадсон]

Прям каждый??

[Эльза.]

хотела бы я быть миссис хадсон, серьезно, я готова сверять с вики, там каждый сезон и программа в подробностях.
Типа такого "He popped the quad to a double, then doubled the toe loop in the combination invalidating the whole element. 73.25. His lowest score in quite some time. The last time he got less than 75 was 2011."

[Эльза.]

"Yuzuru knew right before he left the ice that the jump was not right. He had to think at lightning speed what he could do to fix it - correcting the jump itself was out of the question, he just about got two rotations on it, unable to at least salvage a triple. For a split second he considered trying another salchow, either trying to get the quad on the end of a combo or wrangle out a triple, but as he completed a half loop to line up for it, he knew he didn’t have close to enough momentum or energy to pull it off. He swore mentally, moving on through his choreography, his mind racing. Dropping the triple toe had caused more damage to his score - if he continued with his planned program, he just threw away over 14 points. He needed to claw some of those points back somehow. He felt a small trickle of relief as he landed his quad toe, but he was still scrambling to do the maths. His quad toe was his next most secure jump after his triple axel; he would do a combination to at least retain four quads in the program.
He threw himself into the triple axel, adding a triple toe. The crowd roared as he landed the second quad toe with the swell of the music, realising what he had done. He dropped into his spin, trying to calculate what points he had managed to claw back so far. It amounted to a little less than two points in base value he had managed to gain over his original layout, but if he did an axel for his final jumping pass instead of a lutz, he could claw back close to five points. He exited the spin, going through his choreographic sequence, feeling the nervous tension in the crowd. The air felt electric, the crowd watching intently, collectively holding their breath as he lined up for his final jump. Triple axel, Yuzuru threw himself into it with furious determination."

я не помню, когда в последний раз в фанфике столько считали))

[хотела бы я быть миссис хадсон]

Эльза., господи, я помню этот прокат.

[Эльза.]

хотела бы я быть миссис хадсон, и вот там так все. Последняя пока глава доходит до нынешнего сезона прямо.